I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Tuesday, August 9, 2011

revenge (55-F)

55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction that are either limited to a maximum of fifty-five words or have a requirement of 55 words.

She knew that the  "way to man's heart is through his stomach" 

So she cooked for him. His favourite delicacy. 

He wouldn't refuse it.
Nor will she be held guilty. 
Not in his eyes.
Not at least till he is alive.

The next day...

Newspapers read  - "famous business tycoon , died of food poisoning" !!


  1. lol.
    inappropriate response i kno. shorrie.
    bt y did she kill him! :o

  2. :D

    she din kill him sweety, It was unintentional :D

  3. this was unintentional??heeh
    I liked it anyway...

  4. ha ha lol. that was too funny. liked it

  5. Quite interesting and she is not guilty...Good writeup...

  6. 55 fiction seems some what similar to the "flash fiction"...where the most touching one written by Hemingway with one line..."Baby's shoes for sale, never worn!" Well this was good...keep writing:-)

  7. Even I believe it was unintentional :D :D
    Good one!

    Love, Risha :)

  8. I liked the way she killed but reason still remains in dark. Lot of assumptions.

  9. sadiya - Tht u carve out with ur own imagination! :P

    serendipity - It wasnt unintentional..she did poison him!

    red handed - no it wasnt!

    some unspoken - lol..thnks!

    rachit - thnks!

  10. saru - well, i ll let readers decide tht!

    nasnin - no, they are two different things i suppose. its like a 55 fiction can come under flash fiction but not vice versa. and indeed, this one is marvelous..thnks for sharing! :)

    risha - ok. if so many ppl believe the same..i'd let it b tht way only!

    prateek - 55 fictions r supposed to do tht only. arnt they? d plot shud be open...

  11. :P....sweetness clads the worst of out intentions...:)....

  12. The way to his heart left with no beat at all