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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Friday, February 18, 2011

haiku challenge day-18


an era bygone
once buzzed with fishes and men
now coldly wretched








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7 comments:

  1. trishaFebruary 18, 2011 at 8:18 PM

    sadness perfectly captured.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/17/torn/

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  2. Beyond HorizonFebruary 18, 2011 at 9:05 PM

    This is amazing...just few words and has the strength to say a lot...You are so good at it :)
    Keep Writing :)

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  3. Kristen HaskellFebruary 19, 2011 at 3:32 AM

    Oh this one left me with a chill. Nicely played Haiku

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 7:47 AM

    forlorn state indeed :(
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/h-ku-19-debris/

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  5. Sarah malikFebruary 19, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    @ trisha - thnks!

    @ poonam - Aww...that so nice of u to say that, but i believe am still a learner...u start writing and u'd do even better am sure :) thnks!

    @ kristen- means so much! :)

    @ lynnaima - yes it is :( thnk u for dropping!

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  6. Someone is SpecialFebruary 19, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    sarah, nice Haiku...

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  7. eyeographyFebruary 19, 2011 at 11:44 PM

    Nice work...
    sad but very well written :)

    Sumit Sarkar

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