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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Monday, February 7, 2011

haiku challenge day-7


Fiery warrior
thy sword utters brave fury
saves thy countrymen





written for the


10 comments:

  1. beautiful use of anger. just adored it, for once it will used for good.

    mine is here
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/07/free-soul-7th-feb-2011/

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  2. oops! here:

    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/04/anger/

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  3. a noble hero whose fire can ignite change... this is a brilliant piece, sarah. :)

    http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/dreaming-of-change.html

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  4. a different take on the theme.. Loved this brilliant piece..

    Somoene is Special

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  5. very well put together .. Fear of warrior and anger of warrior can make and destroy a Kingdom :)

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  6. Chivalry, the antithesis of anger. Sweet.

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  7. wow sarah.. you are truly emerging in writing haiku's.. :)

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  8. @ trisha - yes! i wanted to portray something positive, thats where d idea came from. grateful for ur comment :)

    @ bing - now thats a good thot, fire for change! thnks!

    @ SIS - so glad u liked it :D

    @noble N - i loved ur comment..wonderfully said. thnks a lot :)

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  9. @ mike & sandy - have u been here before? if not, then welcome :) and thnks for ur lovely thots!

    @ varsha - that means a lot! I ll try my best to churn in even better ones:D

    @ jingle - thnk u !

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