I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Friday, March 25, 2011

A strange encounter (55-F)

55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

In her favourite red dress she tip-toed to the most deserted corners.
vibrant ambiance impelled her
to scour the place when suddenly her eyes got fixed on a man behind.

"A loner like me?" she smiled thoughtfully and marched towards him.

"May i help you ma'am" ?

At once her jaw dropped.

 "what...A waiter" ?? !!!


  1. I wish I could write LOL in much bigger font and size than this. :D

  2. At your service? I don't mind at all.

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  4. Hey, Hi
    Well that was really thoughtful...wen ppl actually expect some real nice convo, the only thing that passes is duty n stupidity...
    :) nice..ROFL....

    The Silhouette...

  5. Prateek - this one is enuf to make me happy :))

    Simran - 55ers r supposed to bring in i guess my job done :D

    Amropali & muddassir - The lady had already been too taken aback , A disguise sounds an interesting possibility though!

  6. punam - yes , thats right! :)

    Purba - i guess she too was in desperate need of a drink :P

    Eon - oh yes! expectations hurt more often than not..such is life! glad u liked it :D

  7. What did he reply?? I'm eager to know.

  8. @ vyankatesh & muddassir - c'mon a poor guy out to work, what do u expect him to say??! Maybe something like 'I can't buy you a drink but can i make one for u 'maam'' :P nehow , i have let readers fantasize their own replies! :D

  9. That was something really enjoyable!

    In few words, you have also shown that we always try and search for someone like us!

  10. LOL, too sure of herself, hahaha
    Nice one!

  11. @ lila - small joys turned into GREAT disappointments sometimes :p

    @ pri - :D

    @ poonam - u got it right! well said..glad u liked it :)

    @ blasphemous - poor girl, u should not make fun of her ! :( :D

  12. Waiter hua to kya hua....
    Dil dekho, personality dekho,aur kya guarantee hai lal dress waali madam badi high society and khoobsurat hai... Had it been the case she wouldn't have been single...
    Point proven..
    they should marry :D

  13. @ gaurav - hehe..waiter ka dil kaise dekhen :O and ye kisne keh diya that all high society ppl r committed? or maybe she recently had a brk up? no points prove. they should simply mind their own businesses :P