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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Friday, September 23, 2011

Unimpeded....



Taking hold of me
from dawn to dusk
and dusk to dawn
in blooms and flush

desires never die
unconsciously they lie
flourishing like weeds
causing untold miseries

spinning concentric webs
thread by thread
entangling and breaking, entangling again
futile is to impede

amorphous kindling aspirations
setting up wildly like a storm
rooting deep to the deepest
outgrowing the tallest of trees

I fight and I resist
those arrays of emotions
but there is no holding them
futile is to impede

neither meaningful words
nor soulful talks
can subdue those temptations
and futile is to impede....

17 comments:

  1. Beautifully penned :) :) This was just exactly what I had in my mind :)

    Cheers,

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  2. beeeeaaaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful.....liked it so much :)

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  3. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE!!
    such a realistic poem!

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  4. desires never die
    unconsciously they lie


    Kill sweet desire, faith may numb the trial, but can you run all your life. Kill sweet desire, truth will make a liar, you can run but not hide
    ~POTF

    Nice post!

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. let is go..let is flow...futile is to impede...

    lovely lines :)

    Cheers!
    SUB

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  6. i like the way you repeated "futile is to impede" it was beautifully done.

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  7. The journey from first to last paragraph is so well knitted. I love the last paragraph. Beautiful poem...

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  8. @ tanvi - glad i could read ur mind..hehe :P

    @Israr - thnkkkkk uuuuuuu so much :)

    @red handed - yeah...bitter reality of life!

    @seema - thnks!

    @ Anshul - ah! they r immortal...no escape from these desires :)

    @ SUB - :)

    @sujatha - glad u liked it :)

    @saru - u write amazing poems yourself..so feels great wen its coming frm u :D

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  9. neither meaningful words
    nor soulful talks
    can subdue those temptations
    and futile is to impede....from start to end it was so perfect and real....beautifully penned...:)

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  10. Wow.. that is an wonderful read..! and so true too!

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  11. @ vyankatesh - thnk u :)

    @ vaisakhi - thnks for d lovely comment girl :D

    @KP - :)

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  12. I am not that much into poetry but when i read something that i like, i think i continue with that..its hard to explain how i felt but i think one word will do... touched

    http://jayendrasharan.wordpress.com

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  13. Nice poem You string together words beautifully. I liked the core around which the poem revolves. The mystery of how to keep a check on desire and temptation still eludes us.

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  14. i like this.. this is my first time at your blog and I'm impressed with the way you play with words.

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  15. neither meaningful words
    nor soulful talks
    can subdue those temptations..
    A Temptation is the most beautiful thing a human has...

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