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a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
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sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
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Wednesday, February 9, 2011

haiku challenge day-9


Imposing silence,
but as I drown in your arms
Divinity lilts.

PS : This happens to be my first haiku on something mushy and romantic. And I wasn't sure about how to use today's prompt 'LILT' . Kindly let me know if I did justice with it. thanks :)


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13 comments:

  1. FatimaFebruary 9, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    Hey it's lovely ! I loved this one a lot :)

    Great goin...

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  2. Mike PatrickFebruary 9, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    I would never call it mushy and romantic. I would call it beautiful. Silence, love and divinity: a trio you can count on.

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  3. Someone is SpecialFebruary 9, 2011 at 8:48 PM

    sarah, 'divinity lilts', wow, awesome.. I basically love romantic ones. You did a great job.. If you read my older posts you will know how much I like romance..

    Someone is Special

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  4. Eon HeathFebruary 9, 2011 at 9:45 PM

    Hey, Hi
    theres something in store for you at my blog...chk it out..
    :)

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  5. Julie Jordan ScottFebruary 9, 2011 at 11:34 PM

    I like mushy!! :-)

    Congrats on stepping out a bit with this one. Lovely!

    My Day 9 haiku

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  6. DishiliciousFebruary 9, 2011 at 11:54 PM

    me like!! :)

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 1:51 AM

    It's hard to write romance but it works in this haiku.

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  8. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 10, 2011 at 6:27 AM

    super sweet and smart one.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 7:26 AM

    It is hard at first, but it will get better! Lilt was a tough one indeed!

    Mine is here:

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    This is not "mushy" - it is Divine! Thank you! Well done ~~

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  11. A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart!February 10, 2011 at 4:45 PM

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  12. A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart!February 10, 2011 at 4:46 PM

    That was sweeeet!

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  13. Sarah malikFebruary 10, 2011 at 5:02 PM

    @ mike and becca - point noted! this is not musy and i would say that what i believe is that anything thats pure ( love in this case) happens to be divine :)

    @ others - thnk u soo soo very much.. i m really glad for ur appraisals :D

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