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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Friday, February 11, 2011

haiku challenge day-11



Not mighty always
at times a petite smile
signifies tremendous faith



Not loud convictions
but firm little steps ahead
marks thy faith.



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15 comments:

  1. Mike PatrickFebruary 11, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    Small faith essentials portray a power all their own.

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  2. RaNiiiiiiFebruary 11, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    yes.. i agree with ur first haiku.. a small nod is enuff sometimes.. a smile is more than words for encouragement.. nice take on this prompt

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  3. Noble NFebruary 12, 2011 at 12:15 AM

    faith is always about trusting your own ability :).. well said

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  4. vineetFebruary 12, 2011 at 12:47 AM

    fantastic, coupl of lines job done though i hv to read it twice to intrprt :P

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  5. VivekFebruary 12, 2011 at 1:59 AM

    Hi,

    very well expressed ..liked the flow :) and a message , have faith ..its grows slowly and gradually.

    tc

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2011 at 2:34 AM

    Very nice. I tend to have an explosive effect on those around me because I have a big and loud personality. But those quiet people with profound faith...they are really delicious to be with.

    Shalom,
    http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/11/faith/

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  7. Kristen HaskellFebruary 12, 2011 at 6:05 AM

    Perfect thoughts around faith. I ask myself all the time do I have faith and I realize that if I am asking the question then I must.

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  8. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 12, 2011 at 7:21 AM

    mind blowing imagery.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    Very reflective and explosive at the same time. Thank you~~

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  10. trishaFebruary 12, 2011 at 1:14 PM

    these two are beautiful and perfect portrait of faith. loved the first one a lil more :)

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  11. Someone is SpecialFebruary 12, 2011 at 1:15 PM

    One of the best Haiku I have ever read.. Thanks for this..

    Someone is Special

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  12. Sarah malikFebruary 12, 2011 at 3:23 PM

    @ mike - thts precisely what i wanted to express..glad u liked it :)

    @ varsha - thnks so much :)

    @ noble - and u said it well too, thnx a ton !

    @ vineet - someone actually said this first time on my blog, that they had to read twice to get d meaning...means a lot. so glad for ur comment :D

    @vivek - thnks so so much!

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  13. Sarah malikFebruary 12, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    @ shalom - I' m attributed to similar personality as urs but i have seen people of the other side doing wonders too. thnks for ur comment :)

    @kristen - agree with u... Questioning faith makes it grow deeper. glad ur liked it :)

    @ jingle - glad u liked it !

    @ becca - thas all i desired it to be :)

    @ trisha - personally, even i liked the first one more..thts y I placed it on top. thnks for ur appreciation :D

    @ SIS - now this means a LOT! after 11days i managed to make u say this...feeling heavenly..thnk so very much :))

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  14. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    yes, one step at a time :)
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  15. Paulo GuimaraesFebruary 13, 2011 at 10:56 PM

    Love the first haiku a lot!

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