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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Sunday, February 20, 2011

haiku challenge day-20



coming of spring
blossoming flora,buzzy bees
nectar of labour










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13 comments:

  1. trishaFebruary 20, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    very very lovely sarah.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/gentle/

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  2. Someone is SpecialFebruary 20, 2011 at 5:50 PM

    Nice one.. Thanks..

    Someone is Special

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  3. sonsy lassFebruary 20, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    I love that you managed to fit in the word 'buzzy' - buzzy busy bees :-)

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  4. Blasphemous AestheteFebruary 20, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    May I suggest that you write more things apart from haiku? I don't find lines smaller than what you write in a haiku to give you as feedback every time I drop here. :P

    Regards,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. Mike PatrickFebruary 20, 2011 at 8:25 PM

    A seasonal cycle in rich haiku.

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 9:44 PM

    spring is indeed around the corner, your piece and pic say it all :)

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  7. NankaFebruary 20, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    Nice one Sarah! 'nectar of labor' is great!! :)

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2011 at 6:02 AM

    Enjoyed the "buzzy bees." Something about it makes me smile.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2011 at 12:46 PM

    A haiku to lift the spirits in the middle of winter. Thank you for sharing ~becca~

    Here is mine:
    http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/perfect-heart-and-face/

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  10. eyeographyFebruary 21, 2011 at 1:24 PM

    "nectar of labour"...
    brilliant piece :)

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  11. JAGDISH BALIFebruary 21, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    Lovely and cute. And the lines in very beginning of your blog are really delectable.I am happy You visited my blog and dropped your precious comment. following u.

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  12. Sarah malikFebruary 22, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    @ blasphemous - suggestion taken but i m actually happy just haiku-ing these days. come march , and u ll find me writing other things too. so keep waiting ;)

    @ jagdish -thnks so much sir..both for ur comment and being a follower :) Those lines define me very aptly! glad u liked them.

    @ others - thanks so much. ur appreciations keep me motivated :))

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  13. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2011 at 8:33 AM

    what a lovely one as well!!!! impeccable! :)

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