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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Haiku challenge - day 1


wings flutter slowly
dreams advance beyond horizons
as birds glide.






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12 comments:

  1. DeepikavasudevaFebruary 2, 2011 at 12:34 AM

    Nice one. Words inspire :)

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2011 at 1:10 AM

    Good one.. :)

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 2, 2011 at 2:16 AM

    super elegant Haiku.
    Cheers.

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  4. Prateek BagriFebruary 2, 2011 at 7:28 AM

    I like the synchronization by the birds. :D

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  5. Sarah malikFebruary 2, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    thnks everyone..it was first ever haiku and i was pretty nervous about it..glad u ppl liked it :)

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  6. SouravFebruary 2, 2011 at 6:48 PM

    Never tried this Haiku thing, but your post will certainly make me soon! Coz I liked it :)

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  7. Someone is SpecialFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:26 PM

    beautiful words to paint a beauty.. "dreams advance beyond horizons", Wow, superb thought.. Welcome to 'The Haiku Challenge' and have a great Haiku Month

    Someone is Special

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  8. RaNiiiiiiFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:06 PM

    woww nice 1 !

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  9. Sarah malikFebruary 3, 2011 at 12:44 AM

    sourav- wow! My very first haiku inspired someone to write them, sounds so motivating :D thnks and do write them..its actually great fun!

    SIS - I ll b staying around for sure...haikus r interesting and awesome fun. and feels good to receive appreciation from u...thnk u :)

    varsha - thnks dear!

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:27 AM

    Loved this .. amamzing pic you chose :)

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:41 PM

    what a divine feeling it will be.

    sharmishtha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com

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  12. Sarah malikFebruary 3, 2011 at 4:51 PM

    @ ladynimue - thnk u and even i loved the pic..welcome to d blog :)

    @ sharmishtha - It is for sure..welcome to my space :))

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