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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Thursday, February 10, 2011

haiku challenge day-10


A princess in satin
mourns gravely. For she lost
not empires, but love.




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11 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 8:25 PM

    Lovely. You captured her mourning very well.

    Shalom,
    http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/10/hiding/

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  2. Bing YapFebruary 10, 2011 at 8:36 PM

    your words perfectly described the pain depicted in the image... well done, sarah!

    http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/longing-for-you.html

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  3. Mike PatrickFebruary 10, 2011 at 8:52 PM

    I love when a haiku makes me go back and really look at the prompt again. You saw royalty and satin while I did not; however, it is there when I look with new eyes. The loss of love we both saw may well reflect on our pasts rather than the painting. For this haiku, you have an aptly named blog.

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 10, 2011 at 9:32 PM

    losing love is painful,
    your Haiku is beautiful.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 11:44 PM

    Lost love is even worse than losing an entire empire. Yes, it is! We all seem to see great pain in this girl's posture here...

    Beautifully captured, Sarah.

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  6. Short PoemsFebruary 11, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    Lovely haiku, nicely done!

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  7. Sarah malikFebruary 11, 2011 at 1:50 AM

    shalom & bing -thnks a lot for ur appreciation! :)

    @ mike - I am so glad that i made u wonder over the image and grasp another new interpretation of the image :) and If u go through my posts, u ll realize that my blog name aptly describes them all..after all emotions can never be missed out :D thnks a lot!

    jingle - thnks so much!

    bodhirose -The pain of loosing a love is incomparable indeed...glad u liked it :)

    short poems -is that ur name? ;P thnk u :)

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2011 at 2:16 AM

    This portrays the feeling of loss with eloquence.

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  9. Someone is SpecialFebruary 12, 2011 at 11:34 AM

    nice capture of the theme.. Awesome..

    Someone is Special

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  10. Alka GurhaFebruary 13, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    Beautiful...

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  11. Sarah malikFebruary 13, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    @ live2write , SIS ,dishilicious and alka - thnks a lot :))

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