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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Friday, March 25, 2011

A strange encounter (55-F)

55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.


In her favourite red dress she tip-toed to the most deserted corners.
vibrant ambiance impelled her to scour the place when suddenly her eyes got fixed on a man behind.


"A loner like me?" she smiled thoughtfully and marched towards him.


"May i help you ma'am" ?


At once her jaw dropped.


 "what...A waiter" ?? !!!

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20 comments:

  1. Prateek BagriMarch 25, 2011 at 8:06 PM

    I wish I could write LOL in much bigger font and size than this. :D

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  2. SimranMarch 25, 2011 at 8:11 PM

    Shocked!!
    A waiter..?

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  3. AmropaliMarch 25, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    He might be in disguise! :D

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  4. MuddassirShahMarch 25, 2011 at 10:35 PM

    :) sure may be a disguise :)

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  5. PunamMarch 26, 2011 at 8:11 AM

    A waiter???!!

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  6. PurbaMarch 26, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    At your service? I don't mind at all.

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  7. Eon HeathMarch 26, 2011 at 12:52 PM

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  8. Eon HeathMarch 26, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    Hey, Hi
    Well that was really thoughtful...wen ppl actually expect some real nice convo, the only thing that passes is duty n stupidity...
    :) nice..ROFL....

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  9. Sarah malikMarch 26, 2011 at 4:10 PM

    Prateek - this one is enuf to make me happy :))

    Simran - 55ers r supposed to bring in shocks..so i guess my job done :D

    Amropali & muddassir - The lady had already been too taken aback , A disguise sounds an interesting possibility though!

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  10. Sarah malikMarch 26, 2011 at 4:12 PM

    punam - yes , thats right! :)

    Purba - i guess she too was in desperate need of a drink :P

    Eon - oh yes! expectations hurt more often than not..such is life! glad u liked it :D

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  11. VyankateshMarch 26, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    What did he reply?? I'm eager to know.

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  12. MuddassirShahMarch 27, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    yes, what was his reply??

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  13. Sarah malikMarch 27, 2011 at 2:30 PM

    @ vyankatesh & muddassir - c'mon a poor guy out to work, what do u expect him to say??! Maybe something like 'I can't buy you a drink but can i make one for u 'maam'' :P nehow , i have let readers fantasize their own replies! :D

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  14. LilangelMarch 28, 2011 at 12:12 AM

    LOLS :) Small joys of life :)

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  15. PriMarch 29, 2011 at 9:16 AM

    LOL!! :)

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  16. Beyond HorizonMarch 29, 2011 at 4:05 PM

    That was something really enjoyable!

    In few words, you have also shown that we always try and search for someone like us!
    :)

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  17. Blasphemous AestheteMarch 29, 2011 at 8:26 PM

    LOL, too sure of herself, hahaha
    Nice one!

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  18. Sarah malikMarch 29, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    @ lila - small joys turned into GREAT disappointments sometimes :p

    @ pri - :D

    @ poonam - u got it right! well said..glad u liked it :)

    @ blasphemous - poor girl, u should not make fun of her ! :( :D

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  19. Gaurav AroraApril 23, 2011 at 2:19 PM

    Waiter hua to kya hua....
    Dil dekho, personality dekho,aur kya guarantee hai lal dress waali madam badi high society and khoobsurat hai... Had it been the case she wouldn't have been single...
    Point proven..
    they should marry :D

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  20. Sarah malikApril 23, 2011 at 8:34 PM

    @ gaurav - hehe..waiter ka dil kaise dekhen :O and ye kisne keh diya that all high society ppl r committed? or maybe she recently had a brk up? no points prove. they should simply mind their own businesses :P

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