Late in the evening
snow begins to fall
little insignificant flakes
drapes mountains and homes
lush, pure and calm
like a sea painted white
serene as it flutters
gentle as in sways
In a valley exists a town
a little unheard one
with a dim lit cottage
wildflowers and soft grasses
amidst the mountain range
sits a girl besides the window pane
snow ruffles her dreams
that's her belief
in the loneliness of nights
snow flickers like hope
delighting her yearnings
sharing lost dreams
the silence of snow
talks of untold desires
on petite white flakes
swings endless mysteries.
I'm the luckiest one to comment first on this beautiful poem.. The gal in this poem resembles u a lot :)
ReplyDeletevery beautiful words and feelings.. good to be back on your blog..
wow....i loved the flow the descrption the feel the theme well everythin....n last 2 verses were super good...beutiful write...:)....feels good to be back on bloggers...
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ReplyDeleteFirst visit. Read all current posts. Had a good laugh at your post on Book and On Reasons Not To Love. Ice is a good poem. I fully agree with Each One, Teach One. This poem again shows the depth of feelings.
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beautifully knitted! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely rhyme and words:)
ReplyDeleteInsignficant flakes that paint everything white are laden with tendrils of hope and emotions. Loved the vivid imagery.
ReplyDeleteah..how much i wish to have these flakes of snow expecially in this summer :)
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