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I walk on a road lush with dreams,
a road of forgotten and veiled dreams,
sometimes slowly, sometimes gaily,
sometimes lost, sometimes profound,
I walk a road of unknown mysteries,
fervently finding my way through the endless path.....

Tuesday, August 9, 2011

revenge (55-F)

55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction that are either limited to a maximum of fifty-five words or have a requirement of 55 words.


She knew that the  "way to man's heart is through his stomach" 


So she cooked for him. His favourite delicacy. 



He wouldn't refuse it.
Nor will she be held guilty. 
Not in his eyes.
Not at least till he is alive.




The next day...



Newspapers read  - "famous business tycoon , died of food poisoning" !!


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16 comments:

  1. Sadiya MerchantAugust 9, 2011 at 10:16 PM

    lol.
    inappropriate response i kno. shorrie.
    bt y did she kill him! :o

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  2. AyushiAugust 9, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    :D

    she din kill him sweety, It was unintentional :D

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  3. Red HandedAugust 9, 2011 at 11:45 PM

    this was unintentional??heeh
    I liked it anyway...

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  4. AnonymousAugust 9, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    ha ha lol. that was too funny. liked it

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  5. RachitAugust 10, 2011 at 12:43 AM

    ohh amazing :)

    Weakest LINK

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  6. Saru SinghalAugust 10, 2011 at 5:40 AM

    Quite interesting and she is not guilty...Good writeup...

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  7. Nasnin NasserAugust 10, 2011 at 4:24 PM

    55 fiction seems some what similar to the "flash fiction"...where the most touching one written by Hemingway with one line..."Baby's shoes for sale, never worn!" Well this was good...keep writing:-)

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  8. UnknownAugust 10, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    Even I believe it was unintentional :D :D
    Good one!

    Love, Risha :)

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  9. Prateek BagriAugust 10, 2011 at 7:26 PM

    I liked the way she killed but reason still remains in dark. Lot of assumptions.

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  10. Sarah malikAugust 10, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    sadiya - Tht u carve out with ur own imagination! :P

    serendipity - It wasnt unintentional..she did poison him!

    red handed - no it wasnt!

    some unspoken - lol..thnks!

    rachit - thnks!

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  11. Sarah malikAugust 10, 2011 at 9:25 PM

    saru - well, i ll let readers decide tht!

    nasnin - no, they are two different things i suppose. its like a 55 fiction can come under flash fiction but not vice versa. and indeed, this one is marvelous..thnks for sharing! :)

    risha - ok. if so many ppl believe the same..i'd let it b tht way only!

    prateek - 55 fictions r supposed to do tht only. arnt they? d plot shud be open...

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  12. VaisakhiAugust 10, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    :P....sweetness clads the worst of out intentions...:)....

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  13. KunalAugust 10, 2011 at 11:29 PM

    HAHAHA... :)

    Kunal

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  14. Alka GurhaAugust 16, 2011 at 12:42 PM

    What did she cook?

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  15. Beyond HorizonAugust 16, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    The way to his heart left with no beat at all

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  16. LilangelAugust 16, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    Food Kills !!!Good one :)

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