An empty sky and a hollow me
a silent night and that still tree
I look above and memories unwind
little by little they flow over my mind
a silent night and that still tree
I look above and memories unwind
little by little they flow over my mind
A persistent pain and curbed desires
a deep dark past and burning fires
all mingle wid the blowing wind
surrounding air feels chilly and dry
feels like a dead soul, not even a sigh
a deep dark past and burning fires
all mingle wid the blowing wind
surrounding air feels chilly and dry
feels like a dead soul, not even a sigh
And suddenly as if by a magical string
the winds turn cool and soothing within
the pain still lingers soaring by the night
darkness deepens, dimming all light
the winds turn cool and soothing within
the pain still lingers soaring by the night
darkness deepens, dimming all light
But only for a little more while
coz light is powerful and tears apart
all the bitterness of the past
the skies turn red and full of zeal
to embrace a new day and what it reveals
coz light is powerful and tears apart
all the bitterness of the past
the skies turn red and full of zeal
to embrace a new day and what it reveals
Surroundings afresh but remorse still untouched
the roads are deserted but green and lush
a bright new day is here to stay
dark shadows aside, making a way
the roads are deserted but green and lush
a bright new day is here to stay
dark shadows aside, making a way
As I get up drowsy and dead
sun smiles on me
right above my head
the tree of the night is no more silent
for birds around are chirpy and winds violent
sun smiles on me
right above my head
the tree of the night is no more silent
for birds around are chirpy and winds violent
My soul of the night is still hollow
I walk sedately in the silhouette of a girl
that's not me....
I walk sedately in the silhouette of a girl
that's not me....
not only are your words just superb and delish, the photography is as well! So happy I found your blog! A new fave!!! :)
ReplyDeletehey! thanks a lot for ur war appreciation :) m glad that u liked my blog...hope to c u here more often...
ReplyDeletewelcome :D
mademoiselle,
ReplyDeleteThat was an awesome poem.
Kudos.
Ah just if my poetry was as good as yours :)
Very very well written.
keep the good job going on
beautifully expressed interlaced with beautiful words.
ReplyDeletelovely poem... i can totally relate to it.. keep on writing... :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome Poem.. :-)
ReplyDeleteHi! First time here :)
ReplyDeleteGlad to find such lovely posts.
You've written such intense lines!!
Hope to have a nice time reading our blog :)
wow, a lovely poem that was.
ReplyDeleteMy soul of the night is still hollow
I walk sedately in the silhouette of a girl
that’s not me….
beautiful!
RESTLESS
look whose saying...u write extremely well, m to just a learner. and being modest i duly credit all my poems to my balcony which brings alive the poetic soul in me in the night :)
ReplyDeletereally glad that u liked it :D
hello sohni,
ReplyDeletethis is the best an author can ask for...that ppl relate to his/her work. so happy at ur comment.
welcome to d blog :)
thanx a lot pratibha...keep visiting :)
ReplyDeletehey restless :) happy that u liked it....welcome to d bog!
ReplyDeletethnx so much :D
ReplyDeleteIntense and beautiful!!!
ReplyDeletehie raksha!
ReplyDeletethnks a lot...welcome to b blog :)
hey shruti!
ReplyDeletewelcome to the blog :)
thnks for appreciation!
This is simply beautiful..Each n every word has a uniqueness.. :)
ReplyDeleteKeep going.. :)
thnk u my don :P
ReplyDeletekeep coming...
I have a balcony too and when I look out all i see it the vehicles on a dirty road, guess some poetry i'd work out on tat :p
ReplyDelete........beautiful......
ReplyDeletetender,poignant....
i could imagine the whole scenery...very well portrayed....just a suggestion ...minimise the use of "the" "and" ...as it just hinders the flow of a poem...
ReplyDeleteand please modify line4:its not going with the flow...
its just a suggestion though...no offence meant
well penned anyways...good work
@ magic eye- thnk u so much :)
ReplyDelete@ FP- ofkors i didn't mind, i appreciate ur suggestion genuinely..even i'm working on refraining from the use of and & the..
grateful for ur comment..keep coming :)