a strange voice caught my sight,
the voice was soft,seeping through the door,
still it pierced my heart deep down to the core.
It spoke about what lay within me,
"appearances are deceptive,
staying true to your own self is the key".
I wished to feel pretty,
I desired to feel loved,
I wished I could sometimes,
be in a world where I stood high and above.
But wishes may be countless,
and creating dreams may be free,
life has greater purposes,
and there is only one chance to be me.
"Being pretty is not what counts" she said,
"neither being above all is greatness,
it's the unsaid acts of kindness,
that make you feel blessed".
I pledged then and there,
to seek goodness everywhere,
I will treat others the way i want to be treated,
I will smile and make everyone else's day better,
I will stand on my morals and ways,
and in the end....
I will be there for my own self always
You look like a new blogger but your poem is like a professional poet. The language is so simple yet the meaning conveyed is so enlightening..
ReplyDeletewow! this is so wonderful. i loved all the lines and especially "I will treat others the way I want to be treated, I will smile and make everyone else's day better"
ReplyDelete@sarah....nice name and poem too.... u have done justice with ur poem...
ReplyDelete@ harshad- aww..thnks so much, i m flattered :)
ReplyDelete@ vee - glad u liked it, welcome to the blog!
@ mag- thnks a lot yes! even i m completely in love with my name..welcome :)
amazing lines and great msg.... :)
ReplyDeletestand for urself... its always important.
very touchy lines, seem to be coming straight from the heart.
ReplyDeleteyes please be yourself -- so wonderful to meet you with a smile!
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LOVELY AND LOVELY. A BIG THUMB AND SMILE TO GO WITH. THANKS FOR SHARING
ReplyDeleteperfect rhymes,
ReplyDeletewell penned,
A++
@ deepika & pramod - saw ur comment now..thnks a lot for ur appreciation :)
ReplyDelete@ bendedspoon - wow! a very different name...Even i m equally glad to know u with a huge smile :)) welcome!
@ micheal - pleasure is all mine..thnks for visiting my blog!
@ jingle - thats means so much...u made my day :))) thnk u!
Nice inspirational poem with a message to align to our core values and listen to our inner voice:)
ReplyDeletehey! thnks so much..glad u liked it :))
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